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23 February 2006 @ 09:13 pm
Sadie: I, having to deal with Mika, have become fairly [more than she is] reasonable. I'm usually the one to make up for things. But this time...NO.
Mika: YOU FUCKING C***. I TRY TO FUCKING HELP YOU, AND WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU DO? YEAH WELL, YOU FUCK WITH ME, YOU DECLARE WAR.
Sadie: please go under the cut to see what we're BOTH doing now. And bitch, we hope you're reading this. Or at least, Mika's praying right now for it.
[btw, under the cut is rated R.]

hey there bitch, ready to see Mika kick your ass?Collapse )
And I thought an all-day band practice would put me in a good mood.
Thanks for proving me wrong.
Both of us.

Final words?: FUCK YOU, HOLA FRIENDS. If you're too fucking lazy to fucking send me an email so we could fucking end this damn crap, then I'm so fucking sorry. LOVE MIKA. :D
 
 
level of frustration:: enragedFUCK YOU TOO!
bashing head to:: The March from 1941 - stuck in head
 
 
23 February 2006 @ 01:37 pm
Okay, Mika, after reading that flame, I hope to never be on your bad side...

EVER!!!

As for the "Lost Cause" CharizardRulz like it somewhat. I don't know why, but you can talk to her about it. Now; I think I may be able to get others to join. Black Feathers and Karollene (sorry, can't be bothered typing it) will join because I'll make 'em! Nah, they really want to join without influence from me. So, how do you invite them again????

-Crystal R.

Also, about the flame. I told them that their story sucked (basically, but it had more words) and I got deleted for it...so just be careful from now on~

Freakin' school...I wanna go back to grade 8!!
 
 
level of frustration:: exhaustedLe tired~
bashing head to:: Enya - piano solo
 
 
22 February 2006 @ 05:40 pm
Okay, Crystal, since you asked for it. I'll admit: I really blew my top on that last flame. For those of you who have yet to see it...well, consider yourself warned, this is enough to make any author cry.

EVENTUALLY. WHAT. THE. FUCK.
I actually love to say this: I'm not going to stop until you talk to me. You have totally gone off into absolute irrevocable Suedom. And your grammar is absolutely shit. What are you, in elementary school? This "Ly" figure is certainly playing the role of the tragic hero. And swords. You either use swords in fantasy or you don't use them at all. I'm all for descriptions since my beta does them for me. FYI, we don't go by real names. Or 00-numbers. If you want to use real names, EVERYONE must use their real name or NO ONE uses their real name. And 002 would ignore her. Okay, where does 007 fall in the brief conversation between cyborgs? How come 008 decides to hit HIM? And HOW THE HELL does all of America suddenly know about this insignificant bitch?
I think you thought of us authors who like canon when you named your story - it really is 'A Lost Cause'. You had it coming, so don't go ahead and cry. I know you did after two flames. The way you said it was far too obvious. Better not to metion them, sweetie. I did too and it got worse. [I think it's a California thing.]
Otherwise. For the absolute shittiest stories to date and what level your writing is at:
NUMBER ONE, LEVEL ONE. See my livejournal for details.
~ Mika and Sadie


So do you think I went over the top? If yes, why? And FYI...I've earned the name "flaming half-star band geek" [flamer, authoress, band geek] from my friends. Yeah. So how's that?
 
 
level of frustration:: productiveproductive
bashing head to:: The Blue and the Gray [Civil War Suite] - band CD
 
 
21 February 2006 @ 04:35 pm
Seven open spots before we start doing story checks ^___^. Oh yeah, to all of you people who are bitching about my stories, I WROTE MARY SUES. BUILD A FUCKING BRIDGE AND GET THE HELL OVER IT. Why else would I be so gung-ho to clear this mess up? ^__~

And because of the uproar from a bunch of my offline peeps, I have tested some of the non-cyborgs from Incalzando. And considering we no longer use 00s, 0021 is off the line [well, I won't give it away how this happened. You have to read the end of Riprendere ^____________^], and Katriana had only one flaw to her. Hey, you can't be a predator and not be seductive. None of generation zero scored even a measly point toward Suedom. As for all the people who signed up to do this madness...fehh...after Honors Band, I'll be more than happy to test for you ^__^.

Final words? : ETOILE IS NOT A MARY SUE. SHE CAN HAVE A SWORD AND BE SCARY, BUT SHIT, SHE'S FAR FROM GORGEOUS. THANK YOU.
 
 
level of frustration:: amusedamused
bashing head to:: What's the Justice? - GLOBE
 
 
20 February 2006 @ 07:57 pm
for the next few days, please ignore the bio page. I [Sadie] will be toying with the html, so if it looks really weird, I'm probably in the middle of fixing it.

Thanks for understanding =].
[and yes, the "mood" is true...food poisoning sucks >___<;;]
 
 
level of frustration:: sorefeverish
bashing head to:: Hikari - Utada Hikaru
 
 
 
19 February 2006 @ 03:03 pm
Has anyone here actually read the entire manga series? Sure, the anime pretty much sticks to it, but they're pretty different. I read all ten yesterday and was wondering if anyone else did. I mean, how do you get "Artemis" out of "Helena"? And where on Earth did the Vietnam Story arc go in the anime?! .__O

Yes yes, I'd say the 2001 anime producers are on some pretty serious crack. And now I should go write a manga-verse story.

But! Before I do that. If you've ever been to ff.net and looked at the most recently updated stories, you begin to notice a trend. The summaries all have something to do with girls being captured and the cyborgs not knowing WTF to do with her. They end up keeping her and all fall in love with her. And the reviews all say "GOOD JOB!!!11 KEEP RITING!!!!111", which in these eyes is like saying "I hated your story but want you to feel good". I think this is why concrit exists. I don't generally flame people, unless either:
a) I hate them.
b) I think their story's a piece of shit
c) I'm tired of having all the goody-two-shoes crap for the piece of shit
. So I figure why not make up a grading scale on how to judge stories by? It seems like a fairly good idea. Check the bio page for more.
 
 
level of frustration:: hungryhungry
bashing head to:: Genesis of Next
 
 
18 February 2006 @ 09:23 pm
Yay, look at me, the mod who can't stop posting XD. Okay. I actually have a good idea this time. Yes, Mika had an idea. The apocalypse is coming. Let's get over it, yay?
Whilst at dinner [at Chevy's, writing in a notebook] something struck me. No, it was no a projectile from one of my sisters - it was an IDEA. For this community. A somewhat - bite me if this is stupid - catchphrase. If you've ever heard the song "You Give Love a Bad Name" then you'll get it -

YOU GIVE US A BAD NAME - THE MURDER VICTIMS UNIT

These are the original lyrics [by Bon Jovi, not me]

And now, the Mika edit copy.

Shot through the heart
And you’re to blame
Sue, you give us a bad name
I post my part and you play your game
You give us a bad name

An angel’s smile is what you sell
You promise us perfect, then put us through hell
Chains of pain got a hold on me
When fiction's a prison, you can’t break free

You’ve a loaded gun
There’s nowhere to run
No one can save Joe
The damage is done

*Chorus:
Shot through the heart
And you’re to blame
You give us a bad name
I post my part and you play your game
You give us a bad name
You give us a bad name

Painted smile on your lips
Blood red nails on your fingertips
A school boy’s dream, you've got to lie
Your very first kiss was your first kiss goodbye

You’ve a loaded gun
There’s nowhere to run
No one can save Jet
The damage is done

Chorus


Bite me if you hate it.
 
 
level of frustration:: aggravatedaggravated
bashing head to:: You Give Love a Bad Name - band CD
 
 
18 February 2006 @ 09:36 pm
Mika's right...

This girl is outta control. I got carried away on a rant to Black Feahters; who in response, read the story. I haven't had a chance to read what she's said...but I know it's gonna be really bad. Really bad. But I guess that's what you get for bringing a Sue into this world...

-Grabs dagger- Now, back to bussiness- sees stuningly beautiful girl clinging to 002- Stealth...ness...
 
 
level of frustration:: annoyedannoyed
bashing head to:: Love Hina opening
 
 
17 February 2006 @ 09:52 pm
Okay, now. I'm a pretty good person, can we all agree? *sees nods* Okay then, we agree. Today though, I SNAP*CRACKLE**POPPED! Okay, make Sue deletion priority #1 Miss Hola Friends. Let us review what has happened with this lovely young authoress.
ff.net profile
I honestly wanted to puke after only that much. But things get worse with her greatest masterpiece!!!!1111. I did try to be kind by submitting the following REVIEW:
Um...I won't be mean to you. Really. If you have MSN Messenger or AIM, I'll talk to you away from here. MSN is etarnal(underscore)sailor(underscore)saturn(at)hotmail(dot)com, and AIM is [yes, three "s"s.] sakura3. You've got a Mary Sue problem. Let me help and there won't be a flame.
She said that was nice and she'd do better she promised!!!1111
And then came chapter three and my next review...errr, flame.
honestly. PICK A GODDAMN SIDE.
I've gotta say, for only having one sue, you're seriously doing yourself in. Not even others have done it this bad with seven or eight. You're welcome to come bitch at me. I'd love it if you did.

I know it seems really immature, but as you can see from actual review, I tried to help her. So do you all think it was right? And should we even try to help her in the future? It's up to you people out there.
 
 
level of frustration:: annoyedannoyed
bashing head to:: Into the Storm - band CD
 
 
05 February 2006 @ 04:26 pm
Hey, all of you~! The MVU is pretty empty right now. Mika wishes to offer the first eight people who sign up membership without having to post any stories. It was nine, but then someone ate it up ^___~.
Also be sure to use one of the three snazzy banners. The AMS Cream is finally up and for sale~!! *rubs it on* Oh yeah, if someone could go over this fic and check if it's not wangst, I'd be really happy. I'll even credit when I post. *snarf*
Air - a Jet storyCollapse )
 
 
level of frustration:: creativecreative
bashing head to:: First Love - Utada Hikaru